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The Tannadice Massacre of 2015
The Tannadice Massacre of 2015
(To the tune of The Beach Boys - 'Sloop John B')
Jackie had a dream,
Like Jerry Kerr and Jim McLean,
To make Dundee derby history,
With Schenk in the sticks,
United scored six,
In the Tannadice massacre of 2015.........
NouCamp87
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Re: The Tannadice Massacre of 2015
2nd line doesnae work for me bud.
Otherwise no bad.
- NouCamp87
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Re: The Tannadice Massacre of 2015
Good evening TEK,
Thank you for the feedback.
In what way does the 2nd line not work for you?
Always looking to improve wherever possible.
Cheers mate,
NouCamp87
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Re: The Tannadice Massacre of 2015
Bit of a mouthfull,NouCamp87
Just imo
TEK
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Re: The Tannadice Massacre of 2015
I get what you are saying TEK, one too many syllables, either lose AND or Jim
Like Jerry Kerr and McLean
or
Like Jerry Kerr, Jim McLean
When sang the 'AND' isin't important as it will be sung quickly.